三 文体 リライト-問題演習
実施 方針
問題 1
ヒント
解答例
To give you the short version, we are going to pass on it this time.
To state the conclusion first, we have decided not to proceed with the appointment this time.
To state the conclusion at the outset, the current application will not be approved at this stage.
解説
よくある誤 り
- [REG]: 3
文体 すべてで cancel を用 い、語気 の差 が消 える - [CLS]:
学術 でも会話 と同 じ骨格 を維持 し、距離感 が出 ない
問題 2
ヒント
解答例
We still do not have everything we need, so we cannot get started yet.
Because some of the required documents are still missing, we cannot begin the procedure at this time.
As the required documentation has not yet been fully submitted, the review process cannot be initiated.
解説
よくある誤 り
- [REG]:
会話 でも required documentation を用 いて硬 くなりすぎる - [COL]: start the formalities のような
不安定 な結合 を作 る
問題 3
ヒント
解答例
This shows that we need to choose the method depending on the situation.
These results indicate that the method should be selected according to the conditions involved.
These findings suggest the need to select the method in accordance with the conditions of the target.
解説
よくある誤 り
- [REG]:
学術 でも This shows that we need to ... とし、主張 が直截 すぎる - [CLS]:
事務 ・学術 で背景句 と主節 の重心 が曖昧 になる
問題 4
ヒント
解答例
We are still in the middle of the survey, but we are already seeing some improvement.
Although the survey is still ongoing, a certain degree of improvement has been confirmed at this stage.
Although the survey remains in progress, a measurable degree of improvement has been observed at the present stage.
解説
よくある誤 り
- [TNS]: 3
文体 すべてを単純過去 で処理 し、現時点 との接続 が弱 くなる - [REG]:
会話 でも a measurable degree of improvement として過度 に硬 くする
問題 5
ヒント
解答例
The old system was no longer enough, so we had to bring in a new standard.
Because the previous system was no longer able to handle the situation adequately, it became necessary to introduce a new standard.
As the previous framework was insufficient to address the issue, the introduction of a new criterion became necessary.
解説
よくある誤 り
- [COL]: 3
文体 すべてで cope with it を用 い、抽象度 の差 が失 われる - [REG]:
学術 でも会話 と同 じ bring in を維持 する